The night in Jaipur breathed like a living creature - warm, dense, and weighted with centuries of whispered stories. Dust floated lazily above the ancient stones of Chandpole Gate, catching the muted glow of the streetlamps. The grand archway, usually a bustling artery during the day, now looked like a lone sentinel guarding a kingdom that had drifted into uneasy slumber.
The
scent of rain that never fell mixed with the distant aroma of cardamom tea
still being poured at a late-night stall around the corner. A few dogs lay
curled against shuttered shops, raising their heads only when the wind rustled
the dry leaves across the pavement.
It
was nearly 1:50 AM.
And
Jaipur, despite its history of secrets, had never seen something quite like
this.
Prakash,
a milk vendor who had pedaled the same route for fifteen years, rode his rusty
bicycle through the narrow lane leading away from the gate. His worn white
kurta fluttered slightly as he pedaled; its hem was spotted with dried milk
from a day that had ended far later than he had hoped. The metal containers
tied to the cycle clinked with each turn of the wheel.
He
was humming a tune - an old folk melody he didn’t remember learning but somehow
always remembered singing.
Then
he saw her.
A young
woman stood directly in the middle of the road.
Barefoot.
Motionless. Fragile.
The
yellow streetlight barely touched her, but enough was visible to make Prakash’s
breath catch. Her cream salwar-kameez, decorated with faded pink flowers, was
smeared with mud as if she had fallen again and again. Her dupatta hung
half-torn behind her, dragging like a wounded limb. Her hair fell over her face
in tangled stripes, plastered to her damp skin.
Her
eyes - those eyes - didn’t focus on him.
Or on
anything in this world.
They
were hollow, almost glassy, as if reflecting a scene far away from Jaipur, far
away from this moment, far away from reality.
Prakash’s
hands trembled. The cycle nearly toppled.
“Ma’am…
are you okay?” he stammered, his voice cracking in fear. “Do you need help?”
She
didn’t react.
Her
fingers twitched unnaturally, curling inward in sudden spasms. Her shoulders
jerked. Her breathing came in sharp, broken bursts.
Then,
very slowly, her lips parted.
“He
told me to do it.”
Her
voice was barely a whisper. Thin. Ghostlike. As if scraped from the inside of
her ribs. Prakash felt a cold wave crawl up his spine.
“Who
told you? What happened?”
She
blinked - too slowly, like a puppet adjusting to a new command.
“I
don’t know.”
And
with that, her knees buckled.
She
collapsed as if someone had cut invisible strings holding her upright. Prakash
dropped his bicycle, the metal container striking the ground and spilling milk
across the dusty road. The white liquid spread slowly, seeping into the cracks
like a pale pool of silence.
This
wasn’t the first time he had seen a person collapse like this.
Not
the second.
Not
even close.
He
took a step back, shaking.
“Not
again… dear God, not again.”
Because
Jaipur had become a city haunted not by ghosts, but by people who suddenly
acted like they were no longer themselves.
And
now, another one had appeared.
·
The
police jeep screeched to a halt near Chandpole Gate fifteen minutes later.
Inspector Raghav Sharma stepped out with a quiet intensity. He wasn’t the kind
of officer who announced his presence; he simply existed with an aura of
absolute control.
He
wore dark blue jeans, a charcoal shirt tucked in neatly, and a black leather
belt. His sleeves were rolled up, revealing strong forearms. A faint stubble
shadowed his jaw, and a thin scar cut through his left eyebrow - an old remnant
from an incident he rarely revisited, even in his own thoughts.
Raghav
had the posture of someone who observed more than he spoke. Who remembered
details most people subconsciously ignored. Who trusted facts, not instincts - but
had instincts sharper than anyone he knew.
Constable
Mahesh hurried toward him.
“Sir...
it’s the same kind of case as the others.”
Raghav’s
lips tightened.
He
wasn’t fond of patterns.
Patterns
meant someone was designing them.
“Where
is she?” he asked.
Mahesh
gestured toward a woman seated on a wooden stool, wrapped in a thick woollen
blanket. Her expression was frozen somewhere between confusion and terror. Her
eyes, wide and unfocused, stared at nothing.
Raghav
approached her slowly.
The
woman shivered even though the night was warm. Her fingers trembled against the
blanket, and occasionally her head jerked in small, unnatural angles, as if listening
to something whispered into her skull.
“What’s
your name?” Raghav asked gently.
She
didn’t blink.
He
tried again. “Can you tell me what happened?”
No
answer.
Just
a faint twitch of her lips.
Then,
suddenly - her breathing accelerated. Her chest rose and fell rapidly. Her
hands clawed at the air.
Her
head snapped back violently.
And
then came a scream - raw, guttural, almost animalistic - that ripped through
the silent street. Even Mahesh took a step back.
But
Raghav didn’t.
He
moved closer, steady, calm.
“Get
her to the ambulance,” he said.
As
they carried her away, she kept whispering something no one could decipher. A
faint murmur, like words trapped between worlds.
Raghav
watched her disappear into the flashing lights of the emergency vehicle.
She
was the sixth.
Six
people - normal, unrelated individuals - each committing crimes they didn’t
remember.
Each whispering the same line:
He
told me to do it.
Raghav
exhaled slowly.
Whoever “he” was…he was getting
bolder.
·
Two
hours later, Raghav walked through the majestic entrance of Rambagh Palace
Hotel. The palace glowed under golden chandeliers, its walls humming with old
royalty and expensive quiet. Silk curtains swayed gently. Persian carpets
absorbed every footstep.
But
tonight, something cold lingered beneath the grandeur.
A
28-year-old chartered accountant - mild mannered, polite, introverted - had
attacked a foreign tourist in broad daylight. No motive. No prior history. No
memory afterward.
Raghav
entered the CCTV control room, the cold air-conditioning wrapping around him
like a thin coat. Sub-Inspector Kavita was already there, her olive-green shirt
crisp and tucked into black trousers. She stood with her hands on her hips, her
sharp eyes scanning the footage.
“There,”
she said, pausing the video.
On
the screen, the young accountant walked across the luxurious corridor. His
light-blue shirt was neatly tucked into beige trousers. He carried a leather
laptop bag over his shoulder.
Completely
normal.
Then
- his entire posture stiffened. His face drained of emotion.His pupils dilated
abruptly.
His eyes went blank. And without warning, he lunged at the tourist.
“Rewind,”
Raghav said.
They
watched again - slower this time.
Just
before the attack, the lights in the corridor flickered. No one else reacted.
Too subtle.
But
Raghav saw it.
“Pause,”
he said softly.
Kavita
zoomed in.
The
accountant’s eyes looked… vacant. But not confused. More like his consciousness
had stepped aside, making room for something else.
“A
sudden switch,” Kavita murmured. “As if someone pressed an invisible button.”
Raghav
didn’t respond.
He
was thinking - and when Raghav Sharma began thinking, he entered a zone where nothing
around him existed except the truth he was chasing.
The
truth that felt closer than ever tonight.
He
stepped out of the palace with Kavita. The setting sun bathed the ancient
façade in molten gold.
That’s
when a little boy approached - a thin child with torn shorts and a faded red
T-shirt. He held a single balloon in one hand.
“Sir…
someone asked me to give this to you.”
He
offered a folded white paper.
Raghav
knelt slightly. “Who gave it to you?”
“A
man in a black coat. His eyes looked… strange. Like he could see inside my
head.”
Raghav’s
heartbeat slowed. Not in fear. In calculation.
“Where
did he go?”
The
boy pointed vaguely. “Across the road. And then… nowhere. He vanished.”
Raghav
unfolded the paper. Seven words stared at him: Stop chasing patterns
you cannot understand.
Kavita
leaned in. “What does it say?”
“Nothing,”
Raghav replied, folding the note.
But
something had shifted inside him.
This
was not random.
This
was not coincidence.
This
was personal.
·
Near
midnight, Jaipur sank into the quiet of lamps turning off one by one, leaving
behind long shadows that clung to the ancient walls.
On
M.I. Road, a small grocery shop still glowed faintly. The place smelled of
potatoes, soap, lentils, and dusty incense sticks. The owner was about to close
when a school teacher walked in - soft-spoken, bespectacled, with a checked
shirt tucked neatly into worn trousers.
The
CCTV captured everything.
He
looked exhausted but normal. Then - his
expression froze. His eyes widened slightly, then grew dull. A glaze settled
over them. He picked up a bottle of oil. Smashed it on the counter.
And attacked the shopkeeper with a shard of glass.
When
Raghav arrived, the shop smelled of blood and spilled spices. The shopkeeper
sat with a bandage wrapped around his shoulder, trembling. The teacher sat on
the floor cross-legged. Calm. Almost meditative.
Raghav
crouched beside him.
“Why
did you attack him?”
The
teacher blinked slowly. “Attack? I… I didn’t attack anyone.”
A
pause.
Then
confusion washed over his face. Followed by terror.
“I
remember… a whisper. A man’s voice.”
“What
did it say?”
The
teacher swallowed. “It said… finish him.”
Raghav’s
pulse deepened. “Did you see who the voice belonged to?”
“I
think so.” The teacher gripped his head. “I think I saw him once… but every
time I try to remember, everything turns black.”
He
screamed and collapsed forward, clutching his skull.
“It’s
like someone is wiping his face out of my memory!”
Raghav
steadied him. Inside, something cold settled into his bones. Someone was
hijacking minds. Someone was erasing their own identity from the memories of
their puppets.
A
ghost.
A
puppeteer.
A
thief.
A
thief of minds.
·
Rain
began around 2:00 AM - thin at first, then pounding. The city blurred behind
sheets of water. Raghav sat alone in his office, the soft glow of his desk lamp
illuminating files, photos, and reports.
Six
faces stared at him from the table.
Six
lives shattered.
Six
memories stolen.
He
unfolded the note again.
Stop
chasing patterns you cannot understand.
Outside,
thunder rolled. In the flash of lightning, Raghav noticed something reflected
in the glass window of his office:
A
silhouette.
Someone
standing outside his door. Tall. Completely still. Raghav grabbed his gun and
strode to the door. He flung it open. The corridor was empty. Except for an
envelope lying on the floor. Inside were three words:
You’re
getting closer.
A
whisper floated through the corridor - thin, eerie, impossible to trace:
“Catch me… if you can.”
The
lights flickered.
Raghav
felt a deep certainty settle within him - like a stone dropping into water.
The game had begun.
·
Far
from the city lights, a half-ruined haveli crouched like a forgotten beast. The
courtyard was drowned in shadows. Cracked walls leaned precariously. The faint
glow of an oil lamp flickered inside one of the rooms.
A man
sat cross-legged beside the lamp. He wore a plain black kurta, his posture
unnaturally straight. His hair was combed back neatly, his face calm - serene,
even. Too serene.
A
ten-year-old boy stood in front of him, trembling.
“I
want to go home,” the boy whispered.
“You
will,” the man replied gently. “But first, you will listen.” He lifted a
finger.
The
boy’s pupils widened instantly. His breathing slowed. His face relaxed. His
fear vanished. The man placed a hand lightly on the boy’s head.
“Every
mind has a door,” he murmured. “Some are locked. Some are cracked. Some…” He
tapped the boy’s forehead, “…are wide open.”
The
boy’s voice became flat. “What must I do?”
“You
will deliver my next message.”
“To
whom?”
A
slow smile curved across the man’s lips.
“To
the one who is beginning to see me.”
He
stood, shadows wrapping around him like loyal servants.
“Inspector
Raghav Sharma.”
·
Back
at the police station, Raghav stood in the corridor, staring at nothing - listening
to everything. He didn’t believe in spirits. He didn’t believe in miracles. He
believed in minds. And someone had weaponized them.
He
gripped the note.
“Whoever
you are,” he whispered, “I’m coming for you.”
Outside,
rain blurred the street.
A
little boy stood at the gate - drenched, shivering - holding a sealed envelope
with Raghav’s name written on it in flawless handwriting.
The
boy didn’t know it yet.
Raghav
didn’t know it yet.
But
that envelope would change everything.
Forever.
·
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